Critique chips

Clauuu!... I would like to say that since the first time i saw your product i loved it!! And definetely is going to be hard to make you a critique, but i'll do my best. The only thing that caught my attention for a critique was that you said that you would like to get to agreements with bars and clubs, but: are you sure your target market (as for the stores and other characteristics you said) is going to be at those clubs?, or what are you pursuing with introducing it to the bars and clubs.